The Technology Inside Me

I see you peering at my screen
As the electricity is entering my fingers through a keyboard of lust
the next rage, the plan’s next step, the “the” and how we define it.
a race against the clock, tick took off the tock.
Come be a rapper or sing a melody.
With all this twitter, I am losing the true me. I love and hate technology.
Spell check told me to change and I lost me again and again and it will happen again.
Writing and burning, writing and burning, lust and how I am returning.

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Rachael Phillips said…

"With all this twitter, I am losing the true me."

Wonder what reaction that would bring if you tweeted it, listing your blog site.

8:17 AM

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